L.G Experiment with direct speech and commas for phrases and clauses

S.O.S

• Minimum one page
• Paragraphs
• Use correct sentence punctuation and correct use of other punctuation

Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water , Jack fell down and broke his crown and  Jill came tumbling after

“AHHH!” “Jack, where are you?” Jill said panicking. “ I’m over here<” said Jack” Where is here? ”  Jill said confused. “ I’m behind the POISON IVY ”  Jack screamed. Jill ran over to her brother Jack. “ Did you roll through it? “ Jill asked. “ I have no idea, But I do have an idea of what mum will be like when she see’s this “  Jack holds up his crown. “

What have you done you foolish egg? “  Jill asked “ I broke the crown “  Jack said worried for his life. “  Well no dha , We will have to find someone who can fix it. “  “  Who are those fat children who got left in the woods by their evil stepmother? “  Jill asked trying to remember .”  I think there called Hams and Gret “  Jack replied. “ No, no it’s close, Hansel and Gretel that’s their names.”  Jill corrected Jack. “  Ahh yes, let’s go and find them “  Jack suggested. “  Yes right away “

Part two coming soon