L.G Experiment with direct speech and commas for phrases and clauses

S.O.S

• Minimum one page
• Paragraphs
• Use correct sentence punctuation and correct use of other punctuation

Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water , Jack fell down and broke his crown and  Jill came tumbling after

“AHHH!” “Jack, where are you?” Jill said panicking. “ I’m over here<” said Jack” Where is here? ”  Jill said confused. “ I’m behind the POISON IVY ”  Jack screamed. Jill ran over to her brother Jack. “ Did you roll through it? “ Jill asked. “ I have no idea, But I do have an idea of what mum will be like when she see’s this “  Jack holds up his crown. “

What have you done you foolish egg? “  Jill asked “ I broke the crown “  Jack said worried for his life. “  Well no dha , We will have to find someone who can fix it. “  “  Who are those fat children who got left in the woods by their evil stepmother? “  Jill asked trying to remember .”  I think there called Hams and Gret “  Jack replied. “ No, no it’s close, Hansel and Gretel that’s their names.”  Jill corrected Jack. “  Ahh yes, let’s go and find them “  Jack suggested. “  Yes right away “

Part two coming soon

AMP Show

Intro

In New Zealand we have many great things happening all around new zealand. But i’m going to talk about just one thing that happens in New Zealand and that is the AMP show.

Rides

There are many different rides at a AMP show such as the hurricane, Dragon roller coaster, Scream machine, Turbo Boost, Ferris Wheel and the GRavitron. These are the most of the common rides you will find at AMP shows all around the world.

What you can do

At the AMP show there are so many things to do. THere are stalls in the hall with crafty stuff in them such as headbands and all sorts, There are food trucks to grab some food, There are you can play for $2 up such as the clown, The shooting game and darts, There is the horses and the cows and there is McDonalds farm where you can buy animals and pet them.

The cost

To get into the AMP show it cost $2 to go towards the lion club. To go on the rides you have to buy tickets ect. 50 tickets cost $55 dollars and you can buy as much tickets you want. YOu need tickets to go on rides for example the hurricane will be 6 tickets so you give the person running the ride 6 tickets so you can go on the ride.

Conclusion

This is what happens at AMP shows. I hope I have informed you to go to a AMP show next time you visit.

DNA

Have you ever wondered how DNA was discovered. If not I will be informing you how it was found, How it works and about the double helix.

In 1869 a swiss doctor Johann Friedrich Miescher was studying white blood cells from pus-soaked bandages. He isolated the nuclei of these cells. When he analyzed the chemicals inside the nuclein he discovered a new substance called ( Deoxyribonucleic acid ) DNA for short. Scientists knew genes are found inside the nucleus. So people were wondering if nuclein was made of DNA ? Despite Johann Friedrich miescher findings, few scientists thought the findings were true. Most scientist felt that the genetic material might not of came from the DNA but in the substances called proteins. It wasn't until 1944 that canadian-born scientist Oswald Avery finally proved that DNA - not proteins carried the cell's genetic instructions.

Fact: DNA is an extremely long molecule.

Our cells contain a set of operating instructions in the form of deoxyribonucleic acid ( DNA ) The DNA in everyone's body has the same structure. We have two long strands that wind around each other to form a double helix ( or a spiral ) Dna holds the coded instructions called genes. Genes are needed to build and run cells. It can also copy itself, making sure that instructions are passed through it accurately when the cells are divided.

Earlier I have talked about DNA and a little bit about genes, which carry our features from one generation to the next are made of DNA. The DNA in genes control the production of substance called proteins. These build our bodies and run our cells, THe mechanism by which DNA coded message is used to make proteins in the cells of living things