Thursday, 17 March 2016

Moment in time



As I sit in the white fluffy snow. I can feel my body shaking consistently. I can see a giant snow storm coming my way but I can’t move i’m stuck. My eye’s felt droopy and saggy. With every blink my eyes slowly start to shut. I wake up buried in snow. I can’t feel anything from my knees down. My ear’s get attracted to birds off in the distance chirping for warmth. My nose gets attracted to pine off of the pine trees. Snow is dripping off my face down into my throat. The snow stops but then suddenly hail comes racing down smashing on top of my head. I crawl up and race under some bushes for cover.

2 comments:

  1. Great writing Danni you have achieved our learning goal
    From Marissa

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  2. Danni
    I really liked the way you stuck to your LG it was a great and precise story it was very discriptive and i enjoyed reading it. Good job!

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