L.G To write poetically.
SOS. Descriptive and precise vocab.
Organising ideas.
Using accurate Punctuation.
Fear
Fear is black.
Fear taste likes rice risotto
and smells like damp sillage.
Fear looks like a sad,lonely,child.
Fear sounds like shreking ,
Fear worries me.
Danni I like the way you described fear and used the correct punctuation.next time remember to cheek for spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteFrom Marissa.
danni I like the way you have used precise vocab and punctuation in the right places but you need a space between your comers one thing you could work on is detail.
ReplyDeletefrom Adelaide :)
Danni, I like your description of fear and used correct punctuation. Next time remember to cheek for spelling mistake. By the way I kinda like rise risotto.
ReplyDeleteFrom Charlotte XD
hi danni great way of describing fear
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